I awoke last night to the sounds of
Heavy drops pelting the windows
Pitter-pattering on the roof
Rain
Now the skies are growing bright
The greyness erased from the sky
Daylight shining through
Sun
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erikaloularson 
So few words that paint a really clear picture. Lovely poem. I was jealous reading “Heavy drops pelting the windows
Pitter-pattering on the roof.” That signifies a restful sleep to me! I love sleeping when it is raining! Thanks for sharing!
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Love your word choice.
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Love the choice of the single word “rain, sun” because it really emphasized the detail. Great for visualizing.
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Who knew you were such a poet!? Love the simplicity and the structure!
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What a lovely poem. I went to bed with rain and then woke up to it. I tried my hand at poetry this morning describing the early morning sounds.
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